A pretty conservative experiment with motion blur here with Amanda's hand. Hopefully I'll get a feel for it before I get to the really aggressive action scenes. If you wanna see a speedline/blur MASTER, go read PLANETES by Makoto Yukimura!
The blur is alright, placed on the right scene, The amazing thing is that you colored it using a very similar tone and not that complicated shading..Less is more.
Robot Chuck:
Do you go by "Robot Chuck" or "x3022?" Thanks for the compliments on the dialogue - I've been rewriting it over and over, to the point of actually changing it as I drew. Maybe I'll have a better grip on it as I go.
no, the motion blur was great! i stopped when i saw it and thought, that looks awesome. was that done on purpose? and then i read your notes and saw that it was. very nice. and the dialogue, especially on this page, is very realistic. hard to do, but you do it. nice.